Return-Path: Received: from vps.transocean.com by vps.transocean.com with LMTP id wN0HHgXoxFouAwAAInt2oQ ; Wed, 04 Apr 2018 07:58:13 -0700 Return-path: Envelope-to: Ivon@transocean.com, alexandra@transocean.com, stephen@transocean.com, dean@transocean.com, dena@transocean.com Delivery-date: Wed, 04 Apr 2018 07:58:13 -0700 Received: from cpe-74-66-246-146.nyc.res.rr.com ([74.66.246.146]:43666 helo=[172.16.42.2]) by vps.transocean.com with esmtpa (Exim 4.89_1) (envelope-from ) id 1f3jrY-0000Ok-Se; Wed, 04 Apr 2018 07:58:13 -0700 User-Agent: Microsoft-MacOutlook/14.7.1.161129 Date: Wed, 04 Apr 2018 10:58:08 -0400 Subject: Re: Natura-Illusions-Windsor Brochure From: Deborah Beblo To: CC: , , "'Dean Smith (Dean Smith)'" , 'Dena Hickey' Message-ID: Thread-Topic: Natura-Illusions-Windsor Brochure References: <000401d3cc21$924fd990$b6ef8cb0$@transocean.com> In-Reply-To: <000401d3cc21$924fd990$b6ef8cb0$@transocean.com> Mime-version: 1.0 Content-type: multipart/alternative; boundary="B_3605684293_657616" > This message is in MIME format. Since your mail reader does not understand this format, some or all of this message may not be legible. --B_3605684293_657616 Content-type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1" Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable Hi Ally, These are the changes that I would suggest re the styling and page layout: P2 remove extra page # p4 remove date at bottom (date & footer should go at the end of the document) p5 remove extra header (put quality on the top of the page like on page2) p6 remove extra footer p7 remove extra header (put quality on the top of the page like on page2) In general, I think the brochure looks a little piecemeal. If time allows, = I suggest using the same margins throughout the document to give it a uniformity of design. Also, I suggest using a uniform page template (not entirely possible since the Nature rugs are a different format, but try to make the page layouts similar. Page #=B9s in the same location, telephone & website info the same on each page, qualities in the same location, etc.). Many of these changes can be made globally on the master pages in order to save time. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you, Deborah Deborah Beblo Liora Mann=E9 / Trans Ocean Imports From: Alexandra Paisley Organization: Trans-Ocean Import Reply-To: Date: Wednesday, April 4, 2018 at 10:31 AM To: Dena Hickey Cc: , , Deborah Beblo , Dean Smith Subject: Natura-Illusions-Windsor Brochure Hi Everyone,=20 =20 Please review attached as I have combined Natura, Illusions, and Windsor into one Brochure. Let me know of any revisions or if it looks ok. =20 Best, Ally=20 --B_3605684293_657616 Content-type: text/html; charset="ISO-8859-1" Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Ally,

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These are the changes that I would suggest re the styling and page= layout:

P2 remove extra page #

p4 remove date at bottom (date & foot= er should go at the end of the document)

p5 remove extra header (put quality on th= e top of the page like on page2)

p6 remove extra footer

p7 remove extra header (put qual= ity on the top of the page like on page2)

In genera= l, I think the brochure looks a little piecemeal. If time allows, I s= uggest using the same margins throughout the document to give it a uniformit= y of design. Also, I suggest using a uniform page template (not entirely pos= sible since the Nature rugs are a different format, but try to make the page= layouts similar. Page #’s in the same location, telephone & websi= te info the same on each page, qualities in the same location, etc.). = Many of these changes can be made globally on the master pages in order &nbs= p;to save time.

Let me know if you have any questio= ns.

Thank you,

Deborah

Deb= orah Beblo

Liora Mann=E9 / Trans Ocean Imports

From: Alexandra Paisley &l= t;alexandra@transocean.com>=
Organization: Trans-Ocean Import<= br>Reply-To: <alexandra@transocean.com>
Date: Wednesday, April 4, 2018 at 10:31 AM
To: Dena Hickey <dena@transocean.com>
Cc:= <stephen@transocean.com<= /a>>, <Ivon@transocean.com>= ;, Deborah Beblo <debra@transocean.= com>, Dean Smith <dean@transo= cean.com>
Subject: Natura-I= llusions-Windsor Brochure

Hi Everyone,

P= lease review attached as I have combined Natura, Illusions, and Windsor into= one Brochure. Let me know of any revisions or if it looks ok.

Best,<= /o:p>

Ally

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